An egress strong and compelling distinctly marks its realm
Majestic and towering reveals or conceals what transpires therein
A formidable whimsical structure scanning admittance or rejection
It is a passive witness to many a jubilation and humiliation
Its dual faced ambivalence hinged to swing with an yielding grace
Interlinks and connects all what proceeds on either side of its face
In distinct variance is the duplexity of man a Judas kiss
Cloaked in the garb of chicanery a veil of duplicity a shroud for all that is amiss
A counterfeited facade camouflaging a daunting interior
Often a joyful countenance disguising a dreary worrier
Guarding in its innermost recesses a door heavily timbered spiked and barred
The abode of a darkened soul mauled and shunned by dearth of benevolence
A simmering cauldron festering humiliation and malevolence
Relegated to self imprisonment and isolation
Breathlessly flailing for release from a bastion impregnable before obliteration
A pathetic image of abject misery and callous indifference and intoleration
An entreaty to indulgent souls to salvage prior extinction
With an insistent knock an earnest endeavor pry open closed darkened doors
With a new key unfold golden ingress and sweep away all acrimony and desolation
To reap a rich harvest of love warmth and renewed communication.
~By: Veena Umesh Sood ~
Images: Pinterest
Wow. Amazingly crafted
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Thank you.
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My pleasure
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nice message
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Thank you for your appreciation.
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The titles you chose are genuinely nice!
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Thank you so much.
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Veena Ji it is creativity at its peak
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Thank you so much. Your words of appreciation give me great pleasure. 🙂
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Good read as always! It often happens that certain unsavory experiences and rude encounters pushes one on the verge of darkness, when you retract into a shell and become a recluse…shutting all doors and keeping them heavily guarded with your own surliness and spite and harshness… it becomes your wall against the world, not letting anyone close or in, almost impervious. That’s when you need to look for that “new key” to open the door and let your soul out that’s been enslaved by your own darkness. Break fee from your self imposed imprisonment.
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Yes quite true. A Little help makes a great difference in restoration. Thanks for your comments they add depth to the post. 🙂
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It’s a privilege to read your work, so thank you for sharing your thoughts with the world and articulating them the way you do with such finesse and sensitivity
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Oh ! You are too kind and liberal with your words .Thank you.
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Dark and thoughtful!
Meno
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Thanks.
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Dark and alluring…
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Thank you
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I love the imagery that you’ve crafted. Also, it’s as if underneath the words there’s a message and it’s up to readers to dig to find it. I enjoyed reading this post!
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Thank you so much. I feel we need to look around us and help those who are unhappy and isolated.when hurt festers its consequences are harmful.
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You’re welcome! I couldn’t agree more
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Powerful imagery that conveys the picture of a heart encased in a protective prison finally liberated by responding to “an insistent knock an earnest endeavor pry open closed darkened doors.”
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Thanks for your appreciation. Many a time we life in self created hell blind to reasoning a little help makes a great difference in overcoming our demons.
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Amazing
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Amazing vocabulary! My hands are reaching out the dictionary. 🙂 Much to learn for a person like me who hardly reads that too old , formal , literature English. Well, I am sure the dark soul will be rescued as there is always dawn after dark. It’s just the matter of time. The dark soul must be trying to slumber behind the closed doors if not haunting the visitors.
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Thank you.I am happy that you enjoy my posts.My intentions are not to intimidate anyone with my way of expression but it is a natural flow. I guess a generation ahead of you we grew up with a passion towards English literature which is reflected in my writing.As for those trapped in creation of their fears and apprehensions they will definitely find light if they seek it in earnest.:)
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Yes! The abject misery inside is often masked by a face of laughter. Exquisite language with an understanding of the darkness within.
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Yes often we are deceived by the outward expression.Thanks for stopping by.
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Thanks its all of you that make my work good.
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Hi Veena Very Dark! Thank you for your comment on my poem “Perfection!” Peace and Best Wishes. The Foureyed Poet.
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So many of us this side, that it feels remote the other side.
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Nice photo to go with your poem
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Thanks.
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Beautiful! I enjoy reading your imagery.
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Thank you so much. It is so encouraging to read such good feedback.
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Another splendid piece of poetry! From the depths of darkness to the brightness and warmth of hope, all in one poem. Quite a journey reading this, cheers Veena aunty! 🙂
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It is difficult to gauge the complexities of human nature equally difficult to know what festers within .I feel if a little concern of ours can help those who around us the world would be a better place to live in.
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Indeed! I agree with you completely 😊👍💕
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
THE ONE WHO WROTE THIS IS BRIGHT!
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Thank you. Now that kind of appreciation will definitely go to the head.Thanks for your frequent visits .It gives me great pleasure. 🙂
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That’s what I like to know…! “_
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Jonathan I like that! 🙂
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🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Photography , the art Zindabad 🙋
Fabulous work.
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