With remorseful eyes I gaze at the orange glow which fades in the horizon
A decrepit frail soul deflated and rusted tormented by conflicting passion
A tenebrous silhouette a mere shadow darkened to obsidian closer to death
With a cumbersome burden of unresolved concerns to rectify before final breath
The dying embers in the distance brighten the Stygian sky before the final call
It enkindles embers within momentarily emblazing the soul with the forbidden haul.
Brother dear! You were my guide my anchor my pride
Together we shared common passions with nothing to hide
Our hearts did rejoice with common goals carefree laughter and a fierce fraternal tug
We swam across the river to secret haunts and scaled mountains with many a hug
The heartbreaks the secrets of adolescence the unrequited fancies to you did I disclose
The turbulence of youth the restlessness and recklessness you did bridle and dispose.
Fraternal rivalries a common phenomenon with myriad instances of honest reconciliation
That we have erred I do agree let sagacity prevail to shed rabid barriers and revive reparation
You were my keeper and Kane and Abel we were not, let’s compromise and bury the separation
We are the warriors the comrades of yester years reminiscences of childhood escapades craving reunion
Let us ignite the dormant love and stamp out the smoldering hate and simmering wrath
Vanquish the malice and untrod the perfidious treacherous war-path.
The frailty of time and in judiciousness I implore to bury grievous wrongs and restore the fall
To embrace on familiar grounds and mitigate the past before the heavens call.
By: Veena Umesh Sood
Images: Pinterest
I love this write. Fantastically woven piece of poetry.
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Thank you so much .It feels good to get a feedback from you.🙂🙂
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It’s my pleasure. 🙂 Good poetry and the thoughtful verses makes literature meaningful. Keep writing and my best wishes, always.
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I’m an engineer, to me its a bit hard to understand.. “a library of vocabulary in a poem”.. All I understood is u have an awesome brother 🙂
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Wow!! Perfect in the present conditions and a wonderful comparison (I wish I could’ve used as fancy words as you have but my short term memory has been hampered, rather conveniently after four cycles of chemo 😀).
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Hey ! Give me some credit for my age .you have a long way to go so keep going .😀😀😂😂 Take care lots of love.
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Oh beautiful Veena (punctuation omitted purposely)…
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Hi Randy ! Thanks a lot . Yes ,the omission serves a purpose. Glad you stopped by to share my thoughts and comment on them. 😊😊😊
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Yes, to encompass all possible configurations of the meanings… We are fortunate you’ve been able to and have chosen to express those thoughts…
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Amazing words! I love the style of it too.
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Thank you. Have a great day.
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A lovely piece and so beautifully written!!
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Thank you for your appreciation it really is a boost.
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Beautiful piece of literature..
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Thanks a lot all the likes spur the urge to write.
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Keep writing i am loving your work
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Truly heartwarming
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Thank you so much .Very kind of you to comment
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Another wonderful piece Aunt Veena. 🙂
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Thank you so much.
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Your words, you make them yours and beautiful 😃
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Thank you dear .😊😊😊
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Such beautiful work. So much to learn. I need some time to understand it completely. Even I have past memories that that brings me enormous pain- abuse, race of egos, satanic laughters in the veil of insincere apologies and even more grievous.. But I believe each experience in life holds a meaning.
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Thank you.Sibling rivalry is very common as we grow in age so does our ego.Wish the selfless love of childhood would stay for ever.
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So true. Sometimes I feel that I was forced to grow up even when I had happily chosen to remain a kid. And now I can’t grow down…kidding! 🙂
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Wish it could happen. However growing up has its perks.
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Agree. But sometimes we are no able to do much to bury the separation and we have to accept the inevitable.
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This is an absolutely beautiful poem Veena!
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Hi! Thanks a lot . Glad to read your words of appreciation.
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A message for all the couples having troubles in their relationship. Restoration of faith ain’t easy but that’s the test which most couples go through. If you have a heart then loyalty , etc doesn’t matter at all. Awesome poem really 😊😘
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I like your perspective..Every relationship needs a lot of under standing space and sacrifice.It is a conscious effort to build and maintain any relationship.Thanks for your interpretation and participation.
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Glad that u are okay with it. 😅
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I know this is a relationship between a brother & sister that u referred. But I have interpreted it slight differently. This poem is also applicable for lovers.
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Powerful and stunning words. Ah, if only the heart was strong enough to pump out all the misunderstandings and pain. Mesmerizing poem!
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Thank you so much.Relationships are so complicated the more we try to understand them the more they get tangled.
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Well said. A very insightful post, a very good read 🙂
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You write well. *applauds*
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Thank you for your visit and appreciation.Your encouragement hones my creative instincts .😊😊 Have a wonderful day .
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You very well deserve it. My comment isn’t subject to flattery but honesty. 🙂
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Lovely. Well written. Powerful.
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Thanks a lot it was nice of you. To visit my blog.
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Thanks a lot .your comments are sincerely appreciated.
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Beautiful. Thank you for the lovely words 🙂 ❤
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Thank you for visiting my blog. Thanks for your appreciation. 😊😊
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I do not consider myself a poet by any means but I do love reading poetry. This is so beautiful to me. It resonates deeply because I lost my only brother, my best friend. He was amazing and now he is gone but will never be forgotten. Thank you for sharing. I loved it.
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Thank you for appreciating my post . Not a great poet myself I write about things that touch me deeply. When my expression finds readership it gives me pleasure to connect. In someways it soothes my soul . Thanks once again . It gives happiness to be read and commented on.
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You are right Veena it does give happiness. :o)
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Good one
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Thank you for the visit.Thanks for the like.
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Pleasure to read
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