Farther than the planets seven
Beyond the measureless seas seven
Far and above the heavens seven
Rising further than the starry sisters seven
More wonderful than the wonders seven
Melodious than the diatonic scale seven
Unfolding joys sevenfold seven
Unfettered by the days seven
Growing pulsating twenty four seven
Encompassing man’s ages seven
Blossoming sans the care of shepherds seven
In far flung regions of continents seven
It is not an itch of days seven
Nor a wonder of days seven
But a realm beyond the skies seven
Brighter than the rainbow colors seven
Permeating through the seed of life and it’s circles seven
Revered and pure like the blessings seven
Venerated more than the sacred vows seven
Akin to embracing the virtues seven
A path as beautiful as the paradise paths seven
Far and above the idyllic Arcadia Zion or the pearly gates divine
Where exists a realm inexhaustible infinite and pristine
Impeccable unblemished irreproachable and irresistible
Endearing joyful and ecstatically unbelievable
The haven of acceptance trust and bliss
The ultimate repose embracing you in its vastitude and measureless confines
‘Tis the oasis of true love.
By: Veena Umesh Sood
Illustrations: Pinterest
Nice one
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Thank you so much.
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Simply superb.
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Thank you so much.I sincerely appreciate your response.😊
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Seven stars to this wonderful creativity
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Thank you .A wonderful and heart warming response.😊😊😊
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Pleasure is mine, Veena 🙂
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The story of seven is wonderfully woven . Very original!!
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Thank you .I am glad my post appealed to you. Have a great day Radhika . 😊😊
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You too!
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I’m still marvelling at this piece, Aunty! A big wow!!
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Thanks a lot Kunal. By the way your blog is serving great variety these days .
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😊 I’ve just started dabbling in painting again after a long long time! Did you like it? And the thought behind it?
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It’s great.Must pursue it for it gives great pleasure and satisfaction to follow heart’s desire.
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Thank you, I’ll follow your advice
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It;s the first time I am reading a poem with such a flow yet it’s meaning is held in every single line right on spot. Genius writing, you are a true mentor in this art, your work is one that can be endlessly adored! Hope you doing great dear.
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Cezane your words are pleasing. I love them . Thanks a lot .Hope you achieve your goals. Take care.
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You should get out of ten three more than seven! 🙂
Well written 👍
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Thank you for your visit and like.😊😊
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Pleasure is mine! As I always learn something new from your writings! 🙂
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Oh ! You flatter me . You write so well. Your blog is so rich and inviting.
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That’s your greatness Veena! I’m such a simple person who writes very simple poems! But its an honour to get this compliment coming from you! 🙂 💖
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Wonderful study, Veena. I’ve known that the number 7 is attributed with exceptional significance, but never knew how much! Great knowledge fulfillment and poetry!
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Hi ,thanks randy it feels great to be appreciated and your work being acknowledged.Love the feedback.lots of love .Have a great day.
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Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.
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Thanks. I appreciate your gesture. 😊😊
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You’re welcome
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Very interesting read.
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Thank you Sumith. Nice to hear from you.😊😊
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You are very welcome my friend:)
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Lovely. Thank you 🙂 ❤
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True Love is a beautiful emotion . Especially the process is exhilarating !!! Nothing is worth “Love”. I loved ur poetry. 😘💖💖
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Shreya ,thanks a lot.Your comments are always welcome.
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A seventh heaven. 🙂
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😊😊Rhyme in time appreciates rhyme.
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