When life becomes confounding and peace seems absconding
The merciless grind is impounding with its travails compounding
Concerns become astounding and the heart frantically pounding
Reckon it is the hour for serious sounding and instant grounding
The need to break away from the surrounding and its incessant hounding
A sojourn to the Coral Isle Pattaya a destination seemed an appropriate bounding
Its vibrant coast and spectacular landscape a perfect landing to unwind and unpile
The brimming sandy beaches and the clear turquoise waters appealed to my profile
The pleasures of sunbathing and snoozing the masseuses all excitement worthwhile
The colourful canopies floating midair a spectacular sight to behold and smile
An adventure I mused surely for the young and valorous but definitely not my style
But temptation a seductive mistress allures and beguiles nags nags till you comply
An irresistible urge I find myself among the excited crowd to experience heart’s delight
The harness suspended with the parachute like a brilliant plumage set ready to alight
All agog to be airlifted and experience human flight aided with borrowed wings
To soar above the milling crowd unchecked and unhindered till the heart sings
A gentle tug and I am airborne the take off is smooth and steadily I gain altitude
No quivers or qualms all fears waylaid the spirit of adventure and a vibrant attitude
The shimmering waters below the infinite expanse above extraordinarily delighting
Pure serenity pervaded to usher a welcome inward calm soothing and enlightening
The multitude below receding indistinct blurred almost nonexistent and insignificant
With obdurate manifestations absurd expectation and vexatious temptation rampant
A rare moment defined in a zone so sublime blending with the previously unknown
Joy ecstasy and bliss heralding the dawn of a world untainted and just my very own
A pure heavenly awakening an unclouded vision with keen perception and reflections
The cessation of illusions and all kind of hostile projections and wavering connections
A profound absorption of a clear strong directed mindfulness and fearlessness
Relinquishing corporeal affections dissent and doubts and uneasy restlessness
To shun obstructive dogmatism and cynicism the path leading to hollow escapism
And rise above all objections rejections oppression suppression and pessimism
A surreal experience to be airlifted to exalted heights and delights.
By: Veena Umesh Sood
Wow! What an amazing experience👍
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Hi Radhika ,it indeed was a wonderful experience .Thank you .Lots of love .😊😊
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❤💙
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Wonderful lines and such eloquently narrated the imagery. This verse narrates so many emotions and it’s a joy to read. Beautifully penned.
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Thank you so much Amitav .Coming from you it feels great.I am glad you liked it.
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Im going to have to really unpack this one. I like the style of it I should add.
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Thanks Michael your appreciation is so wonderful it takes me to dizzy heights once again. Thanks once again.😊😊
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An exciting experience marvellously interwoven into beautifully detailed poetry! Wonderful! 🙂
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Thank you so much .
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Bravo, brave lady! I couldn’t do either of these 👆🏽, the verse and certainly not the parasailing!
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Thank you Kunal .Love your words.God bless .
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Beautiful poem , loved it Veena! Soaked with philosophy n emotions..A flow thatz so enthralling !
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It so kind of you to read appreciate and comment on my poem. Thank you so much.All the feedback is an incentive to move on.
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invoked a tanka I hope to your delight
for that’s what your words did for me
a parachute flight would to me excite
hot air balloon a flight more time to see
two hours maybe three many a sight
comes to mind an ostrich farm is one
that and much more made the flight
for all twelve of us loads of jolly fun
~~~~~~~~INTEGRITY~~~~~~~~~
to fly by sailing
freedom of the mind up high
it will open eyes
to feelings of a sound heart
expressed with integrity
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Got some images from the balloon flight, leave you a pingback when I find them.
Take care, enjoyed your poem – Mick
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Oh ! Mick this is so amazing and pleasing .what a spontaneous and brilliant response ? Thank you so much.Just wonderful!
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Your most welcome, and in reply to your last comment keep an eye open for the pingback, soon
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You bet I will.
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Looking forward for the images. Take care warm wishes.
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☺
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A link to the images https://micksinernestblog.wordpress.com/2016/12/25/hot-air-balloon-flight/ have you allowed pingbacks cos it is not showing. Best wishes for this day – Mick
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a happy landing
to creatively live
& tell the tale 🙂
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Thank you so much for your wonderful words. loved them . Hugs& warm wishes . 🙂 🙂
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Very cool indeed. Glad your spirit was lifted!
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Honestly , I experienced total bliss and realised that everything below was no longer important and we waste our lives in useless pursuits.While happiness lies in a simple content life. Thanks for your comment . May peace prevail. 🙂
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I understand! And yes may we seek that which is important. Peace to you.
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Wow Veena..
Every sentence was illustrative and very creative.
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Beautiful poem
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Hi Tebogo….Thank you so much .Your kind words are very pleasing .Every word of appreciation makes the poem more readable and rich. God bless.lots of hugs and warm greetings.
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Wow Aunt Veena! Beautifully penned verse. It took me to great astonishment and fills me with appreciation ( I hope, I have written it correctly..!😅) that a woman at your age can paraglide. I must congratulate you for this. It’s quite inspiring to many! I wish you have plenty of such delightful flights soon and write many more poems to add joy to our reading experiences. God bless you. 😊
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Hi Smita , thank you so much.I am so happy that you trying your best to overcome your hesitation and are writing so well. Keep working at it and you will notice the difference in some time.Thank you so much and I am happy you liked my post. Thank you for your kind wishes.
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Thanks for your care and concern, for all the motivations. 🙂
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This was such a descriptive piece and an intriguing read. I loved reading every sentence of it ❤
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At times when you sit down to write emotions flow faster than ink .Thank you so much for the kind words.
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It is such a great experience over there in Pattaya! How did you feel walking under water? ☺😊
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Yes indeed it was but I missed out on the underwater part.
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Ohh! Its ok. At least the snorkelling part was something like underwater!
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Yep.
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That was a wonderful experience. How much I enjoy reading your subtle descriptions, beautiful expressions and personal feeling. ☺
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Thank you so much. You have summed have my writing so well. Thanks for the keen interest you show and all the appreciation. Warm greetings and peace.
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Beautiful poem! And that seems an amazing experience!!
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Yes Sumith , it was a wonderful experience.Thanks for the like. God bless.
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Oohhh..what an experience..
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It was out of this world . Thanks. Merry Christmas.
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Merry christmas dear
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Thank you dear. May peace and happiness prevail.
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My, would have been a wonderful experience. I am scared of heights 😛 Merry Christmas and A Very Happy New Year to you 🙂 ❤
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Hi,it was a wonderful experience .After the initial hesitation it felt great .Thanks .Hope you a fun filled Christmas and a promising year ahead.lots of love Deepanilamani. Veena😊😊
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Thanks. You are very brave. 😊❤
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Thanks ou for this one!
A very Merry Christmas and a healthy, happy New Year to you all!
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Thank you Dina for your warm wishes and like.I hope the coming year brings lots of happiness ,good health and peace to all of you.
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Sounds like fun!
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Real fun .Much more than expectations.
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Sounds like fun
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Yes it was fun.To rise above literally and figuratively was a novel experience , very enriching. 🙂
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I am so glad
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A long unending poetry ! Loved every word !
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Thank you for your appreciation. I am glad it appealed to you. Thanks for visiting my blog.
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Hope to see you visiting my book site one day
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Definitely would not miss the opportunity . Thanks.
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Veena, what an absolutely FUNtastic adventure you had! And I enjoyed your poetry prose in describing the motivation, the whole experience, and the added inner rewards you gained from your “flight.” Thank you for letting us share in your joy. 🙂 ❤
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Thank you for your like.Sharing personal experiences has been so enriching,it gives great pleasure to know that they are so many who care and rejoice and share precious moments of your life.It definitely is a wonderful feeling.
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Yes, it is! 🙂 You’re welcome. It’s always in the sharing that we are all enriched by it.
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Amazing Veena Ma’am. Keep Smiling and Keep Shining! Happy and Bright 2017…
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Wonderful as always.
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Thank you so much.
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Seems so much fun 😍
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Thanks It really was.
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Wow, awesome poem to match an equally awesome experience! Though better you than me, since I fear heights.😯
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Thank you so much.It really was a wonderful experience. Glad you liked it. 🙂 🙂
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Beautiful & inspiring, yes! Very welcome.😀
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Nice post…. ☺
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Thank you dear.
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You have a beautiful and unique style of writing. I love it.
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Thank you so much.
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Very brave
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Thank you 😊
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