When life intimidates unrelenting pressures overshadow and struggle is merciless
When ravenous decadence preys the soul and hopelessness renders you worthless
When failures haunt and lapses stare callous indifference numbs rejection is tortuous
When you begin to wither and crumble the road is dark and narrow eyes censorious
Then pause search delve deep with vigor and conviction draw strength from within
Release all doubts and apprehensions seek a fresh lease embrace the dormant therein
Life is not a threnody a dolorous psalm nor a solemn serenade or a pitiable sight
Let no plaintive numbers flow no mournful dirge or muffled drums but rise upright
Let rancor not be your choice for it dwells within the disgruntled and dissatisfied
There is no lack of love merely its your choice wake fallow lands are soon deserted
Let grief be brief hide your pride hug the shrugged breach the divide don’t deride
Be a part before you fall apart emerge to merge no longer diverge abandon false pride
The art of forgiving and giving is rare but there is pleasure in sharing and reconnection
Shun the obsession of self affliction and bitter reflection nurture chaste affection
Expectations are false and deceiving affection builds bridges and strengthens ties
Forgo suspicion it colors our vision imbibe colors of life till happiness reaches the skies
Celebrate the miracle called life before it the time of reckoning come lets us rejoice
Darkness gives way to light dawn heralds a new awakening and questions our choice
Grave may be the earthly sorrows but are they to be carried to grave
Resonate love warmth and peace and create joyous memories to be engraved.
~By: Veena Umesh Sood~
Quotes: Pinterest
Love the internal rhymes here and the opposing terms joining hands to convince:
“Let grief be brief hide your pride … diverge abandon false pride”
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Thank you so much. I thought it was a little on the heavier side but didn’t have the heart to modify it.your words make me feel great .
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I wouldn’t judge my own work, just edit later. If it still feels okay a week/month later, then I leave it alone. Let others do that! I wish WordPressers would give honest feedback, helping each other get better at the work/ piece. Instead of fearing the loss of a few follows or comments.
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I agree an honest feedback is alway welcome and helpful.
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Till last breath if we are ‘in love with being alive’, death will be as beautiful as life. And there’s a joy in each struggle. There’s a joy in forgiving, giving, sharing and solitude. Loved it!❤
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Hi! Thanks a lot your words add so much to mine .They are beautiful and express mutual sentiments .
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Thank you Veena. Reading your poetry after such a long period is such a joy and an absolute pleasure. 🙂
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Thanks Cherilyn for your words .It makes me so happy to know that my absence was felt.It feels so good to reconnect with my fellow bloggers for this is my zone of ease and peace. It makes me feel so alive.I am glad you liked my post . Love and warm wishes.🙂🙂🙂
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Thanks you Veena and wish you the same. Tonns of smiles🙂Welcome back to the bloggers world! 🙂💐
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Heartwarming as always Veena. Your words create a soothing ambience in my heart. I am so delighted to read them after months. 🙂 💞
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Hi Sanket ,
It feels so good to be back .To receive such warmth and appreciation. Thank you so much for your kind words .🙂🙂 Have a great day .
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You too Veena. 💐
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I truly enjoy your writing style.
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Thank you so much.💕
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Sound advice, aunty! Nice write!
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Hi! Easy to preach.😀😀
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🙂
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Loved every bit of it ….. so very true we should be sunk in the colours of the beautiful world and in harmony with nature …..that would be a tribute to the Maker
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Hello Jasleen
Thank you so much for your words.Its a pleasure connecting. Lots of love and warm wishes. Veena
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A very insightful philosophy of love. Fabulous. And the way you sum it up by saying Resonate love peace and create joyous memories to be engraved; you absolutely go spot on with it. This poem had a very intense meaning, according to me. And probably a poem, everyone should read.
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Thank you so much. Your comment means a lot our writing thrives on readers ,their views and comments . Feedback is very important,it encourages and stimulates .Thanks .
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You’re welcome. And I will be very happy if you read some more poems of mine on my blog. I know, it’s too ridiculous of me to say that, because you would be busy. But, whenever you get time please give a feedback. You can expect same from me.
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Of course I am going to visit your blog frequently .you don’t have to ask me . I throughly enjoyed your post and am eagerly waiting to be there again . Lots of love.
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Oh! Thank you very much!
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Great piece Veena!
Excellent work.
Just one thing there is a point in this work of art
where you mention the words ‘before it the time of reckoning come lets us rejoice’;
I was wondering whether it can be better written as:
‘before it the time of reckoning comes let us rejoice’.
What do you say?
I mean no disrespect, but I’ll reckon it more grammatically sound.
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Thanks I appreciate your keen interest and honest endeavour of assistance. I guess you do have a point . 😊
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It has been my pleasure,
as this piece of yours- is a beauty! 🙂
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Sitting with a dictionary
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Sorry ! I didn’t realise that I had used difficult words .😊😊😀😀
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Difficult for me 😂😂
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Missed this in the reader. But so glad to have read it now. In awe of your wonderful writing and rhyming skills, Veena….and the message and the inspiration carried by the words are absolutely beautiful. Wonderful timing for me to read it too, needed this sweet dose of reality check ☺️
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Thank you so much Vidhur. Your words are so pleasing and encouraging. I am glad you liked my post. You yourself write very well.😊😊
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Thank you for saying so. The gain and pleasure in reading your writing was all mine though 😊
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So well written and powerful message! 🙂
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I love this piece so much. 😊
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Thank you so much.It is a pleasure to see you on my blog.Thanks for reading and commenting .😊😊
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It’s a pleasure to read your work as well. Thanks for having me here. 😊
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You’ve got a rich treasure of vocabulary. I loved this post!
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Hi Nishita
Thank you for visiting my blog and your appreciation .warm regards have a great day.
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Very moving, and well written post. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you for reading and commenting . Have a great day.
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Enjoyed this very much…I only wish I could write with such depth!
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Thank you so much! You are very liberal with your words .,nevertheless they give immense pleasure .Thanks once again. It was a pleasure to have you on my blog .😊
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You are very welcome…have a great week!
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
YOWZA FOR HER POSITIVENESS!
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Thanks for the appreciation and reblog.
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WE DO APPRECIATE YOU AND YOUR BLOGGING!
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Aww ! That is something so wonderful to say and encourage a fellow blogger . 😊😊
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Yup! 😀 may the Lord bless ya real good!
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